Workshop Reflection

In my draft I am proud of the fact that I have actual information written. Going into this essay I had no idea what I was doing which isn’t unusual. I over thought the prompt, but I eventually came up with a topic and I actually like it to be honest. I’m learning so much about this topic that I genuinely find interesting. When continuing writing I need to focus on the organization of my paragraphs. I don’t have my thesis made yet and that will probably help with that. I think I have all my ideas I just need them to flow a little better together. I also have no idea who I am going to interview so I need to look into that ☹. From the first reflection to this reflection I have definitely changed in the way I even approach the different essays. I used to not b ad descriptive when it came to feedback and I was a little timid because I didn’t want to comment all over their essay. But now I feel like I can openly state my ideas because in the end it will help my peer, or they don’t have to take the advice so it can’t hurt. I pay more attention to finer areas whether it be sentence length and structure variation to the layout of a paragraph. This not only benefitted my peers, but it can also benefit me because the more I pay attention to their writing and how to help them, I can also employ these techniques when editing my own papers.